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Declined: Ambassadorial| The Untied Kingdom of New york

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simcityguy78



Country:The Untied Kingdom of New york
population:50 million
capital city: City Of London
2nd largest city: Portsmouth
currency:£ POUNDS
National Anthem: God save the King or (Queen)
monarch:Queen Mary Of New York
King or Queen: queen
Next in line:Prince David Of New York
Next in line is 1st boy of queen/king or 1st girl
goverment partys:Labour,Conservative,Liberal Democrat And other
Prime minster:Jordan Grattan (mp for clapham and city of london con)
deputy prime minster:Nick Simpson(mp for downton ld)
History:
in 1400AD the City of Eastleigh was placed as capital of London king henry I made the country of london as the country of New york. In the year 2000 the queen made a tour of the country from London To Portsmouth
In 2012 New york Bided for the Simplympics but lost the bid

flag:
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New york is in the content of shiland


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Buckingham Palace Home to the royal family of New york And Commonwelth




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houses of parliment and home of the prime minster and goverment

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lONDON and the country's tallest bulding And Downtown


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This is The Simplympic Park stadium and Houses if New York Host The Simplympics


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Wellcome to Old London you can see all the old buldings and new buldings owned
by the Navy


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Wellcome to Southsea Home To The World Trade Centre


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DownTown New Orlando With Skyscrapers



Last edited by Michael-M on Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:48 pm; edited 18 times in total (Reason for editing : to make it better)

Jack

Jack
Member (Acadia & Valessia)
Member (Acadia & Valessia)

Skeptical Well, first I would like to ask what membership you are applying for. You are applicable for Observer and Ambassadorial.

Second, pictures are required. There is a pinned topic in the application center forum that will help you. Smile

Third, we need a map of where your country is going to be. Here is a map of Adonia, the USNW role-playing planet. Use this if you are applying for ambassadorial membership. If you want observer, I can assume you know where to find a map of Earth.

I hope that helped. If you have any questions just ask.

YingBlanc

YingBlanc

hmm interesting, especially since we have another Britain style country gonna come in xDxD especially the name, it'll be good to have some Earth influenced names like that (not that all of them ain't xP)

I await your pictures in suspense and wonder what this new member will give us, just follow Jacks advice and you'll do fine.

Trevy

Trevy
Member (New Terrance)
Member (New Terrance)

What they said, and also (just my opinion) but the name? Its just a mixture of Countries names. I understand its part of your history but it doesn't really sound like a realistic Nation.

Scotch Moen

Scotch Moen
Member (Folland)
Member (Folland)

Yeah, if you'll be accepted, you may need to work on your name to better fit this world, since it's not supposed to be Earth. Razz

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Carl

Carl

Hello, Welcome to the USNW, I'm Carl (as seen in my username) Razz. I'm glad you applied in the USNW! Well, first thing first, you need to supply us some pictures and the map you are applying with. We also want to know what membership you're applying with (Ee99 was an observer, so we knew that he applied here as a full fledged member)

Secondly (Copied from Chip), I wanted to go over a few things on your application:


Guide:

Absent - Requirement not met
Needs Work
Good to go!


Requirements

Flag - Okay, thou shall not steal. Please create a simple yet identifiable flag or you will not be accepted.

Map - You need to supply us some maps. You can check out the Map of Adonia in the forums. (@Jack - Observers are now recommended to have a parcel of land in Adonia)

7 Pictures - We need 7 pictures as this is a major requirement in entering the union. We will wait until you supplied us with pics, preferably until a month after this application is presented.

Info - You need some work here. You need to supply us more information (example: GDP per capita, Military strength, national anthem, etc.) You also need to change your posted information for a bit (after all, this is the planet of Adonia, not Earth).

Other Requirements

Custom Content - Custom content is required and expected of our members. It's okay to have Maxis content as long as it's not repetitive.

Realism - Show us your pictures first

Terrain Mod and Water Mod - Although it's not required, it makes your cities look a lot better if you get a terrain and water mod. Pegasus has some great water mods, and there are also some great terrain mods on SC4D and the STEX.

In-Game User Interface - Please Remove the user interface, like the U-drive it bubbles and the menu.

High Quality Images - Show us your pictures first. Please save your images as a .PNG or even a high-quality JPEG picture.

I also think your name could use some work, I reallyyy don't like people copying the names of real nations and real people too, except under very different circumstances


Again, thanks for applying!

If you need more help, check out the past applications

http://www.usnw.net/t520-membership-setup-guides
http://www.usnw.net/t1302-pending-ambassadorial-new-terrance
http://www.usnw.net/t1162-accepted-full-membership-follmeran-chancellery
http://www.usnw.net/t837-imperial-federal-kingdom-of-troix

Good Luck on Your Application!



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Carl

Carl

Updated*

On a Side Note

simcityguy78 wrote:Untied
Is it Untied? Laughing or United?

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Guest

I'm going to have to say no until there is more to show...

Carl

Carl

Well Escil, See the above post (the requirements) Razz

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Jack

Jack
Member (Acadia & Valessia)
Member (Acadia & Valessia)

Please don't use the flag of New York City. You're going to have to come up with something original for a yes from me. I can help if you want.

stanislavsoltys

stanislavsoltys
Member (Malinova)
Member (Malinova)

I know I'm not a member, but if I were, this would be a no from me. Sad

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Carl

Carl

Okay that's good flag for me (Though a tricolor again?) Razz

We'll wait for SC4/CitiesXL pictures soon. The sooner, the better.

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Will

Will
Member (GSK)

Shiland? eh, not too hot on your location. It's got alot of historical context. I'd like to see your pictures before I say where'd be a good location but it'd probably be somewhere on Euphemia.

Jack

Jack
Member (Acadia & Valessia)
Member (Acadia & Valessia)

If you choose Shiland you may not want to use a tri-color flag. The other flag I made for you would suit the area better. Wink
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Guest


Guest

Not to be mean, but you should be calling your currency, cities, ect. Something original and based on the type of culture your country is based on compared to Earth.

Jack

Jack
Member (Acadia & Valessia)
Member (Acadia & Valessia)

I agree with Escil there. You will not recieve a yes from me until you come up with something original.

And for God's sake, please clean up your application. (Spelling, grammar, etc.)
In the year 2000 the queen made a tour of the conturys

simcityguy78



Jack wrote:I agree with Escil there. You will not recieve a yes from me until you come up with something original.

And for God's sake, please clean up your application. (Spelling, grammar, etc.)
In the year 2000 the queen made a tour of the conturys

i have change the spelling from simcityguy78

simcityguy78



i have added pictures so now enjoy

Daniel

Daniel

Guide:

Absent - Requirement not met
Needs Work
Good to go!


Requirements:

Flag - The flag looks pretty good to me.

Map - You need to supply us some maps. You can check out the Map of Adonia in the forums.

7 Pictures - Six out of seven pictures are now up.

Info - You need some work here. You need to supply us more information (example: GDP per capita, Military strength, national anthem, etc.) You also need to change your posted information for a bit (after all, this is the planet of Adonia, not Earth).

Other Requirements

Custom Content - Although custom content is present to a degree, large portions of it are still 100% Maxis.

Realism - Little to no realism is found here so far. Supertall skyscrapers on a tiny island? Large stadiums, museums, and towers in the middle of nowhere? 21+ Alamos in a single district?

Terrain Mod and Water Mod - Although it's not required, it makes your cities look a lot better if you get a terrain and water mod. Pegasus has some great water mods, and there are also some great terrain mods on SC4D and the STEX.

In-Game User Interface - Please remove the user interface, like the U-Drive-It mission bubbles and the menu.

High Quality Images - The image quality could be a little better in my opinion.

I also think your country's name could use some work, as I believe most members here don't like people copying the names of real nations and/or real people, except under very different circumstances than their positions in real life.



If you need more help with your country, check out these past applications:

http://www.usnw.net/t520-membership-setup-guides
http://www.usnw.net/t1302-pending-ambassadorial-new-terrance
http://www.usnw.net/t1162-accepted-full-membership-follmeran-chancellery
http://www.usnw.net/t837-imperial-federal-kingdom-of-troix

Good Luck on Your Application!

Jack

Jack
Member (Acadia & Valessia)
Member (Acadia & Valessia)

I agree with Daniel. I'd say you should wait a while before applying. This way your SC4 skill can grow. Just look at the pictures posted by other members. I don't mean to offend you; but this definitely needs work. Wink

Scotch Moen

Scotch Moen
Member (Folland)
Member (Folland)

We all love to see new players come to the forums and show intent to contribute to the Role-Play world, but as shown by other members, the USNW has set standards on the quality of our Sim Cities, which needs to be reflective in any way of Real life Communities/Developments/Metro areas in order for Membership to be voted on/allowed. So far your cities lack said Realism but don't worry! Plenty of the users here would gladly give you pointers, advice, tips and any other help you'd need in order to have better looking, detailed cities not just for the USNW, but for yourself too!

After saying this, and seeing that the majority of the needed material has not been met, I'll have to say I'm declining this application.

However this does not ban you from applying again! You can also continue to enjoy the forums and like i said, ask other users; even myself, for help on your city building. Enjoy the forums here and we'll be looking forward to a future application from you, as well as to see the progress you'll make in Simcity 4!


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